Since the beggining of time human beings have fought to get what they want and England is not an exception. Creating a new civilization implies that people is going to change an old one and that means that cultures have to change. It is a fact that when a country or civilization is invaded by immigrants their culture change inmediately because is influenced by many factors, like language, customes, food, races. etc.
Also relationships between natives and immigrats create a new race which is going to be the new civilization. All these mean that when immigrants decide to belong to another country, they are creating a new country because they change the previous one. They become influenced by natives and at the same time, natives becomes influenced by immigrants.
Nowadays, England is one of the most powerful countries in the world and maybe, it wouldnt be if immigrants hadnt go there years ago. Mixing cultures and immigrations are something natural in our evolution.
Batgirl!
(Sorry, I am late!)
Wednesday, October 14, 2009
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Barbara,
ReplyDeleteYour opening sentence was great. When you state your viewpoint at the beginning of your writing it makes the reader to get involve with your ideas.
You pointed out one key element in the formation of The United Kingdom; the existence of natives and immigrants (some pacific, another fighter people). All this helps us to understand the variety of elements that took place in the formation of this Kingdom.
I think you made good relationships between people’s influence on others and the consequences that these influences had upon other people.
About your last paragraph, do you really think that the mixing of culture is always something natural?
Good writing, just try to pay attention to some spelling mistakes.
Regards,
Oscar L.